Story: Chapter IV
Thursday, March 2, 2006 - 8:00 PM
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I wrote most of tonight's story post last Sunday, in a (day-long) moment of inspiration.
I was hoping that'd mean I could spend last night getting a little ahead, but tonight's post was too
important to just move on from: instead of getting ahead, I executed a killer rewrite, lengthening it
to nearly seven pages and, I think, precisely delivering the purpose of the chapter. I hope it makes
you all go "ooooooooooh." Hop on the forum when you're done and lemme know how it struck
you.
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