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Chapter XVII
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Onokos



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PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 9:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Glad to hear it Albatros. Can't wait for the update, but take all of the time you need.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 5:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

What do you mean back to the grindstone? Arne't you writting to relax from the grindstone work, or has a wriiting the story become chor?
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hmm, interesting poke at my subconscious choice of words.

I love the story and when I'm in writing- or in plotting- mode (those are two very different modes, incidentally), I get wicked into it. In this case, though, since I haven't given you guys anything in so long, I'm treating it as an assignment rather than a passtime: I've got so many passtimes to catch up on after these last two months that if I don't elevate Murloc, it'll get shuffled around for a while. I'm still enjoying it, but I'm also very definitely holding my beak to the grindstone on this one.


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Saranus



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 2:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't you mean your beak? You're not allowed to break character no matter how grindy that stone is.

[[fixed, thanks... I guess beaks fare better on grindstones than noses do anyway. - ed]]
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 3:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whatever the case, we'll all be looking forward to another rendering of Horse's Harried Hardship Wink.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 7:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

done and done.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well this is certainly a much needed and refreshing turn of events. I'm feeling better already. Now we just need Horse and Fang to unload the full extent of their glory on the Monastery so we can watch it crumble into dust. Unless, of course, they join Horse's alliance to grind the new scourge into powder.
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Heloly



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 9:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hahah! Nice! I love the language you used. It's like you were bottling up all of the silly until you could put it into a story post.
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Saranus



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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 9:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

5 good fighters? Uncanny.

I think it might be worth mentioning that sea lions don't have a single tail flipper. They have a short pointy stubby tail and their hind limbs are like flippers.


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 9:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOOT horse learned his seal form!! good stuff
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 10:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

But I think seals do...
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 10:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like the sence of humor that the Law has. Subtle, yet still worth a quick chuckel.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 11:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I, uh, like to think of it like this: sea lions' legs are fused together but their feet operate as seperate flippers. Their feet are also bigger and legs slightly smaller, it also works to have the thighs fused and the shins as flippers too.

((THANKS EX Razz ))


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 12:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fang seems unusually happy and confident. Does he know that Horse spilled his guts on the Law to Varimathras?
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 11:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked the ending. Very defined scenes you make of your parts, Alb Smile.
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