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Onokos



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 11:00 am    Post subject: Chapter XIII Reply with quote

Good to know that writer's block is no longer a problem. *cheers*
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 11:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why didn’t the stupid necklace worked? -> I'm guessing you wanted to use 'hadn't worked', at first, but then thought better of it and forgot to change it completely? Smile

Other than that, he seems a bit too friendly towards Ordinn, even though he's mentally 'forgiven' him slightly, it seems a bit too direct. There's no on/off-switch to emotions Wink. Might want to stretch it out a little more, maybe? Smile
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Albatros
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 1:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Amaunator wrote:
Why didn’t the stupid necklace worked? -> I'm guessing you wanted to use 'hadn't worked', at first, but then thought better of it and forgot to change it completely? Smile

you got it. thanks, fixed

Amaunator wrote:
Other than that, he seems a bit too friendly towards Ordinn, even though he's mentally 'forgiven' him slightly, it seems a bit too direct. There's no on/off-switch to emotions Wink. Might want to stretch it out a little more, maybe? Smile

nah =]
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 4:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Horse has a lot on his mind, and now he's just getting to see the complicated ramifications to his actions. An interesting idea. I approve.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 4:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Scaramoosh wrote:
Horse has a lot on his mind, and now he's just getting to see the complicated ramifications to his actions. An interesting idea. I approve.


Seconded Smile.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

you also usually dont cuss out coworkers xP
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 7:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

YAY! I wish it was next friday. This is what I was waiting for. The return to Lordaeron.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 7:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can't imagine the Scourge are too happy with the renegade Forsaken ... and they seem pretty close ... but I guess we'll have to wait until next week for that. Wink
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Albatros
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 6:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

so not even a batted eyelash over Rayn's return? maybe I just liked him a lot more than you guys before I killed him off. or did everyone just see it coming?...
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 7:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Albatros wrote:
so not even a batted eyelash over Rayn's return? maybe I just liked him a lot more than you guys before I killed him off. or did everyone just see it coming?...


I think a 'Duh' is staring you in the face Very Happy.

At least, I expected him...
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Exodus



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PostPosted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Albatros wrote:
so not even a batted eyelash over Rayn's return? maybe I just liked him a lot more than you guys before I killed him off. or did everyone just see it coming?...


I didn't so much expect him as forget about him. When I saw it, I realized it was to be expected because I mean, he's a useful guy to have around.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 10:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

To tell the truth, I couldn't remember the difference between any of those silver hand guys.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alec wrote:
To tell the truth, I couldn't remember the difference between any of those silver hand guys.


well they are a long way back in my memory, plus the dune story is slowly taking it's place.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I just got a call from Rayn's agent, and he says that if you guys don't declare him "awesome" in at least six different ways by the end of the week he's quitting for a job selling skin care products in Japan.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 3:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

psh let him go
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