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Modguy



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

way to draw a carrot on a brick wall :<
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yup, Link is definitely broken. Keeps going back to the Table of contents page....

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

gah! sorry guys... stupid ftp ... stupid... me forgetting to reupload the file via ftp ... Embarassed anyway, it's working now: http://www.albatrosbits.com/murloc.php?book=Two&chapter=12

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way to draw a carrot on a brick wall :<

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

IT'S BACK! THE UBER ADDICTIVENESS OF TMiL!

btw, now would be a good time to introduce friends, as this uber cliffhanger will keep them hooked for at least a few more days
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice, but poor Tamilin. Sad
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 2:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

exhilarating! I was wondering how Horse was gonna get back to Undercity. That's probably the best way possible. Super high-speed aerial dogfight chase with frost wyrms on hippogryphback.


A modest prediction. Allyndil heals Tamilin's wing. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 5:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Dark Canuck wrote:
Now that's a cliff hanger. I did notice one error, however. Salmon are not pink on the outside, but rather a silver/grey (You can confirm with a google image search).


actually, there are many kinds of salmon and quite a few of them have a light pink belly usually with grey specks

oh and that chapter rocked... to put it mildly...
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm shaking Shocked That was GOOD Shocked Shocked NEED MORE Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Scaramoosh, I probably won't be deal with that explicitly. The idea of classes is a little strained for prose work anyway - what class is our hunting, leather-wearing healer elf Allyndil, for example? The blood elves won't play a big role in the story, and the draenei won't be playing a direct one.

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A modest prediction. Allyndil heals Tamilin's wing. Very Happy


Good idea, but nope. it'll be much cooler than that... Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You just love to twist us like that, don't you Great Bird? Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Good idea, but nope. it'll be much cooler than that... Twisted Evil


Jennoa the human who was slain by the Forsaken would work. Though I can also imagine that this would be a good place to introduce Coreiel. Course it could be Sacara and the rest of the Order of The Silver Hand. We know they work with the forsaken sometimes. Course, maybe Uther was raised as an Undead.... Now I'm rambling.

Those are just some thoughts though. Even though I promised not to make any more predictions... crap.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 6:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

“Yech,” said Tamilin suscinctly.

Mis-spell? Succintly?

I am so your spelling/grammar Nazi.

[[[do you know I have never been able to spell that word? fixed, thanks - ed. p.s. you missed two more a couple paragraphs down... metallic has two Ls. some nazi Smile ]]]
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 4:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you want a real nazi; here I am Wink.

"I slid to the ground of Tamilin’s back and dusted myself off. My heart was racing, pounding against the inside of my chest – against my own rib bones, I thought."

Unless Tamilin has a two-storey back, I do think that the first of should be off Smile.

[[[wiseass. Smile fixed, thanks - ed.]]]

Oh, and I abso-friggning-lutely loved that chapter Laughing! It was the best so far, I think. It had both the calm and steady pattern of flight, 'dozing off on the air currents' thingy going on, followed up by the breakneck pace (love that word, your chapter alighted it in my head again Very Happy. I'll be using it all the rest of today I think Very Happy) of a scramble and a chase for salvation.

And yes, poor Tamilin Sad.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yay is rhy back now?? with the dwarf guy and priest dood??? and maybe my friend the orc who help save horse from evil goblin number 1??
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 8:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If Tamilin's wing is hurt is it just broken type hurt or open wound type hurt because of the whole undead ichor touches an open wound you become undead thing, an undead hypogriph would be interesting but hard to ride on i imagine
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