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Modguy
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way to draw a carrot on a brick wall :<
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ColdWraith
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yup, Link is definitely broken. Keeps going back to the Table of contents page....
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Albatros
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Slashtrain
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IT'S BACK! THE UBER ADDICTIVENESS OF TMiL!
btw, now would be a good time to introduce friends, as this uber cliffhanger will keep them hooked for at least a few more days
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Onokos
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Very nice, but poor Tamilin. 
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Saranus
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exhilarating! I was wondering how Horse was gonna get back to Undercity. That's probably the best way possible. Super high-speed aerial dogfight chase with frost wyrms on hippogryphback.
A modest prediction. Allyndil heals Tamilin's wing.  |
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lordmurray
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| The Dark Canuck wrote: | | Now that's a cliff hanger. I did notice one error, however. Salmon are not pink on the outside, but rather a silver/grey (You can confirm with a google image search). |
actually, there are many kinds of salmon and quite a few of them have a light pink belly usually with grey specks
oh and that chapter rocked... to put it mildly...
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Albatros
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Scaramoosh, I probably won't be deal with that explicitly. The idea of classes is a little strained for prose work anyway - what class is our hunting, leather-wearing healer elf Allyndil, for example? The blood elves won't play a big role in the story, and the draenei won't be playing a direct one.
| Saranus wrote: | | A modest prediction. Allyndil heals Tamilin's wing. |
Good idea, but nope. it'll be much cooler than that...  |
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Onokos
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You just love to twist us like that, don't you Great Bird? 
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Scaramoosh
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| Quote: | | Good idea, but nope. it'll be much cooler than that... Twisted Evil |
Jennoa the human who was slain by the Forsaken would work. Though I can also imagine that this would be a good place to introduce Coreiel. Course it could be Sacara and the rest of the Order of The Silver Hand. We know they work with the forsaken sometimes. Course, maybe Uther was raised as an Undead.... Now I'm rambling.
Those are just some thoughts though. Even though I promised not to make any more predictions... crap.
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michellethemit
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“Yech,” said Tamilin suscinctly.
Mis-spell? Succintly?
I am so your spelling/grammar Nazi.
[[[do you know I have never been able to spell that word? fixed, thanks - ed. p.s. you missed two more a couple paragraphs down... metallic has two Ls. some nazi  ]]]
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Amaunator
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If you want a real nazi; here I am .
"I slid to the ground of Tamilin’s back and dusted myself off. My heart was racing, pounding against the inside of my chest – against my own rib bones, I thought."
Unless Tamilin has a two-storey back, I do think that the first of should be off .
[[[wiseass. fixed, thanks - ed.]]]
Oh, and I abso-friggning-lutely loved that chapter  ! It was the best so far, I think. It had both the calm and steady pattern of flight, 'dozing off on the air currents' thingy going on, followed up by the breakneck pace (love that word, your chapter alighted it in my head again . I'll be using it all the rest of today I think ) of a scramble and a chase for salvation.
And yes, poor Tamilin . |
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lordmurray
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yay is rhy back now?? with the dwarf guy and priest dood??? and maybe my friend the orc who help save horse from evil goblin number 1??
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Nikolaus
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If Tamilin's wing is hurt is it just broken type hurt or open wound type hurt because of the whole undead ichor touches an open wound you become undead thing, an undead hypogriph would be interesting but hard to ride on i imagine
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