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Alec



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PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 11:47 pm    Post subject: Chapter 9 Reply with quote

I just can't wait.

It is nine this time right? and not more of eight?
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Onokos



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 1:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You just had to jump the gun, didn't you? Wink Maybe you should wait for the next story is released. If there is another part of Ch. 8, then this is gonna just look strange. Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

=] it's nine, and it's coming later today.
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Onokos



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 11:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoa, Alec ... can I have your crystal ball? Smile
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Sten



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 2:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

blue people, you had to put them in?
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Albatros
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 2:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sten wrote:
blue people, you had to put them in?


you imply that I was making a shoddily-inserted game reference. they are, in fact, enormously important. just... not yet. Smile


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Farsider



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 3:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woo! The Story's back! I love what you did with the Night Elves. Serves them right.

One issue: You mentioned that the goblins and orcs chopped down Feralas, and that Feralas was north of Mulgore. Didn't you mean to say Ashenvale, instead? I'm pretty sure that Feralas is south of Mulgore, and doesn't have any goblin lumbering operations there.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 3:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Farsider wrote:
Woo! The Story's back! I love what you did with the Night Elves. Serves them right.

One issue: You mentioned that the goblins and orcs chopped down Feralas, and that Feralas was north of Mulgore. Didn't you mean to say Ashenvale, instead? I'm pretty sure that Feralas is south of Mulgore, and doesn't have any goblin lumbering operations there.


OOPS. on its way to being fixed.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 5:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great storry, o winged one. I hope to see the next part soon. Smile But take your time to make it good.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 5:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Always a good read. The bit about the Draeni was good, and stumping the Loremaster was even better. I never really thought about how that game ended in the way that you presented it. I will have to talk to my guild's resident loremaster and see what he comes up with. Could be interesting.

I have one favor to ask of the mighty winged one though... If you decide to expand upon a chapter can it be somehow marked on the mainpage? I would be ever so grateful.
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Onokos



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 5:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I loved this little part:
"Soon, I was hollering at the top of my lungs and grinning joyously.
Then a bug flew into my mouth. I clamped it shut." Laughing

and Horse has a very keen way of describing being an agent of the law:
"Did I seriously just get invited into a donít-ever-die club?"

Great story, Albatros, and good to hear about your new job going well.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 6:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I too, laughed at the bug part. Also, if the NEs in Teldrasill are corrupted, would the NEs in Nordrasill also be corrupted? or are they just not immortal and have to make babies?
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good chapter Smile. I saw a little something somewhere about a gerund that should have been a to infinitive... but I'm too sleepy to point you to it (over the half, I seem to recall).
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Exodus



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 8:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Horse is DEFINATELY going to moonglade before this is over.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 9:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think there's a difference between a demon draining the magic for his own benefit, and the spirits drawing on it to fight the demon.
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