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wannabe-poet Guest
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 5:20 pm Post subject: Its not Finished?!?!? /cry |
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Just finsihed reading till the end of chapter 20 at work, knew it wasnt finished going into it but was half hoping that it was Well Needless to say you got my hooked Im really enjoying your writing style, very unique for someone writing in the fanstasy genre. Most people seem try to spin off tolkein, or Robert Jordan, glad to see you took your story in an more personally way, this really shines through espically in the beggining. I also love the fact that everytime i read story i cant help but think to myself... wait a tic.... i know where that is....ive been there!! kewl!!
Anywayz, keep up the great work and write some more chapters!!!
Im waiting anxiously for the part where the long lost Katy M suddenly re appeares when everything seems hopeless and lost.
hahahahah
Best Wishes
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Heloly

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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 6:19 pm Post subject: |
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You know too much, so a team of Elite Lawyer Ninjas has been dispatched to your house, and are under orders to destroy all evidence of your existance after dumping your unconscious naked body south of the border. Have a nice day ! _________________
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Albatros Site Admin

Joined: 15 Jul 2005 Posts: 2111
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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2005 6:43 pm Post subject: Re: Its not Finished?!?!? /cry |
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wannabe-poet wrote: | Just finsihed reading till the end of chapter 20 at work, knew it wasnt finished going into it but was half hoping that it was Well Needless to say you got my hooked Im really enjoying your writing style, very unique for someone writing in the fanstasy genre. Most people seem try to spin off tolkein, or Robert Jordan, glad to see you took your story in an more personally way, this really shines through espically in the beggining. I also love the fact that everytime i read story i cant help but think to myself... wait a tic.... i know where that is....ive been there!! kewl!!
Anywayz, keep up the great work and write some more chapters!!!
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hey wannabe poet, you should hop over to the creative-writing forum and drop some wannabe poetry on us.
glad you like it! aping styles is for the weak. that's a lie, actually, it's for everyone. Basing the story in a world I can log in and walk around has been very useful for me, I'm glad it's part of the fun for you.
wannabe-poet wrote: | Im waiting anxiously for the part where the long lost Katy M suddenly re appeares when everything seems hopeless and lost. |
yeah 'cause that would be unique to the fantasy genre 
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2005 9:44 am Post subject: not finished? |
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i was really getting into that.. WHAT THE HELL AM I GOING TO DO AT WORK NOW??
ah well.. i shall have to check back now and then  |
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mortarman178

Joined: 16 Aug 2005 Posts: 988 Location: no longer in hell but back home now
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2005 12:33 pm Post subject: not done yet |
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i just finish the second part of chapter 22 now im board. it gets all exciting then you leave us hanging AHHHHHHHHHH. lol well keep up te good work _________________ HHB 3-82 FA 2nd BCT 1st Cav Div
"I am become death, the destroyer of worlds."
"A hero is born among a hundred, a wise man is found among a thousand, but an accomplished one might not be found even among a hundred thousand men."
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2005 10:04 am Post subject: the MURLOC IS LONELY |
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Great story a++++++ to bad that im bored now i was gone last week at boy scout camp HAPPY to see u had 2 more chapters waiting forAND 2 requests COPYRIGHT YOUR WORK IT IS WAY SWEET and u should tryon getting a warlock in the story |
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mortarman178

Joined: 16 Aug 2005 Posts: 988 Location: no longer in hell but back home now
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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i keep teasing my self as soon as you put out ch 23 i read it now im oard again lol good job its keeps getting better. i hope Horse learns some cool new tricks lol _________________ HHB 3-82 FA 2nd BCT 1st Cav Div
"I am become death, the destroyer of worlds."
"A hero is born among a hundred, a wise man is found among a thousand, but an accomplished one might not be found even among a hundred thousand men."
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Albatros Site Admin

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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 8:15 pm Post subject: |
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mortarman178 wrote: | i keep teasing my self as soon as you put out ch 23 i read it now im oard again lol good job its keeps getting better. i hope Horse learns some cool new tricks lol |
oh just you wait  |
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