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Part Two - The Crown of the Heavens
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 12:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Post coming shortly, if you're up at this hour.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 12:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's been too long, and for that I apologize. A number of you have told me to take my time and make it good, and although I don't think that I've done so at proper proportions, I have certainly fulfilled the first half and I think I've hit the second half on the head as well. This isn't the rest of the chapter - it's becoming much longer than I'd planned it (a great deal more happens before the flight is over) - but it's another big chunk. Merry Christmas: here's post two of Chapter XI - Flight.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 1:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's probably been mentioned before, but the word "black-clad" jumped out at me this time. The Scourge now has a uniform. They are no longer a disorganized mob of dead things. They are now soldiers who never get tired, don't have to be trained, and obey absolutely. This is a much more dangerous force than the one faced in WoW.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

There's an off-placed line break not to far into the passage, but I'd say that it was worth the wait Very Happy.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2007 10:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

indeed, way to go, god to see you havent lost your inspiration quite yet Very Happy
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dear patient fans,

Chapter XI - Flight grew dramatically over the course of its writing. I also went through a bunch of personal-life stuff that, while all very exciting and time-consuming, has nothing to do with the site (most of it, yet) and so I'll spare you the details. At any rate, the President's Day weekend has been good to me, and I've done as promised: I've finished the now-massive Chapter XI. Here it is, picking up right where we left of last time.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 9:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sooo, does this mean Horse is pwnd dead again?
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOO! More story, and first of the new year, too! I'm a bit surprised at how fast Horse took to flying. I was expecting it to be drawn out over several more chapters and parts before he got airborn.

I wonder though, the Law doesn't seem to be buddy-buddy with the Green Flight, especially not its mistress. Mentions of the Old Gods, too. Is the Nightmare still around, or has that whole thing passed? I wonder if we're going to see Deathwing before the end, what with all this and Prestor at the Monastery.

One item to note before the grammar hounds get here Very Happy

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“I have seen many things,” hissed Fang hurriedly, and I repeated it loudly: “I have seen many things… I have seen for myself what you have all certainly heard: The evil which your work fortifies us against is grave, the gravest evil and the world has faces! Now it is on the movZ0RZ!” I crescendoed, falling into the rhythm of the speech.


[[nothing to see here -ed]]
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 11:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Why would Fang want Horse's desert? And when did Horse become the owner of said desert anyway?

Now, dessert is a different thing entirely...
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 2:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wal wrote:
Why would Fang want Horse's desert? And when did Horse become the owner of said desert anyway?

Now, dessert is a different thing entirely...

I did not make that mistake! I didn't, I double-checked it! I swear I looked it up and everything... damnit... i made that mistake.

I'll fix it when I get home tongiht.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, the beauty of the internet. A few hours, and nobody will ever understand what I was babbling about Smile
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