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Chapter X - The Scourge Attacks

 
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 4:59 pm    Post subject: Chapter X - The Scourge Attacks Reply with quote

One month nearly to the day after the previous one, here's the next one, the last chapter of Part One - Chapter X, The Scourge Attacks. This chapter should really blow the mind of anyone that hasn't kept up with their Warcraft lore. Wink

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The DEMON is STILL in charge?!? How stupid are these guys?
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 7:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay! Bally's back!

This adds an interesting dimension to the story. Now there's two evil genius uber-powered superdemons at play in the world... Brings up new questions, though. It sounds more and more like bringing Sargeras back is the ultimate goal, and surely Balnazaar would like that, but is it in Varimathras' interests? And they're still going after Nordrassil, too, hmm... The scepter that they're talking about though...Ateish? Another Medivh connection? Mysteries within mysteries, me like Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"The door to the gardens banged open, and the tall, black-haired Cardinal Prestor strode in. “There is a skull in the gardens,” the man rumbled. “Your doing, by chance? If I know anything about dragons, that was a lucky blow for a man to land.”

Dathrohan nodded. “Luck favors the powerful, my friend. We mortals can wield magic and wisdom far beyond our years, as you know well.”

Prestor watched the other man for a moment, eyes narrowed. "



hmmmm...black dragonflight, eh?
well deathwing was never killed...

PS...i think this is the scepter
http://www.wowwiki.com/Jeweled_Scepter_of_Sargeras

“And you need something called the Scepter of the… Giant?”
scepter of the titan, sargeras=titan
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:10 am    Post subject: And the dead walk among us... Reply with quote

Guess who decided to come say hey again ; )

Just wanted to drop by and let ya know a few things.

1.) You updated on my B-day. I dinged IRL.

2.) Ive been reading the whole time, ive just gotten darn busy lately ; )

And 3.) The bird still rocks, I check the site every day I can to see for updates.

Keep it rollin man! Makes my day brighter.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 3:59 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The first thing i thought when i read "scepter" was ahn'qiraj. You needed that big one to smack the gong and open up the gate. How cool would it be if vari banged on it again and made c'thun his world-tree-killing bitch.

and how fracking excited is fang going to be about dathrohan. i can't wait to get to the dialogue scene between all the Law members when they all make it back to HQ.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't know if anyone caught this but Darathorn called Prestor Daval and Daval Prestor is Deathwing so maybe he knows of Darathorn's plans and is using them to further his own goals?
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Varimathras, Balnazzar, and Death Wing, all in one building? That is some very promising, subtle, and deep stuff that is going on in your book, my friend.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 3:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woah... That scene did sound strange, but I didn't catch that connection.

Now I'm even more excited.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

All the lore aside:

stood glittered ranks and ranks of glowing yellow eyes, a perfect army, rigid in the dim moonlight, unthinkingly awaiting their orders. I shuddered.
--> Glittering instead of glittered? Or switch glittered for stood (which would smoothen the sentence along).

I believe all the abbots that remained and are alive are on board.
--> who remained

And Melgar, I think the dragon he's referring to is the head of the Bone Wyrm Dathrohan beheaded at the beginning of the scene.

And I actually don't like seeing Balnazzar ánd Varimathras ánd Deathwing. I think it's a little bit of an overkill, but let's just see what you do with it, shall we? Smile

I like the brotherly tussle though ^^. Very lifelike.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 8:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It is possible that not all of these people are who we think they are. If they are, however, it's still not quite overkill since their presence really only shows that these factions still exist and are meddling as much as ever.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Exodus wrote:
It is possible that not all of these people are who we think they are. If they are, however, it's still not quite overkill since their presence really only shows that these factions still exist and are meddling as much as ever.
Exactly. See, what you have to realize, people, is that this isn't just some random monastery at some random time. This is the Scarlet Monastery, ancient home of evil, just as the Scourge is rising again. Any self-respecting warlord of pure evil MUST be there.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

BRAVO birdman BRAVO!!!! another excellent chapter
OMG i found out that an albatross can sleep while flying O.O lazyness ftw
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