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Aidinthel



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PostPosted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 11:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Purple Steve wrote:
IThe trouble at the moment is that I've got a ridiculous amount of work and i'm faaaar too good at putting it off
Yeah, I've been there. You should talk to Farsider, he's been declared the emperor of procrastination or something.
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Exodus



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh man, I thought you said you were bad at writing action scenes? That was amazing. I was physically unable to stop reading the story and start reading for typos and such, so no luck there Razz.
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Purple Steve



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 12:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks dude, glad you liked it Very Happy

oh, and i never said i was bad at it, just that it was difficult, and this one certainly proved that...
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Ulkarr



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PostPosted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 1:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have to agree with Ex. Wow that was cool, bloodthirsty but cool. I find alot of action scenes in books aren't explained enough, but when reading yours I can picture every movment. It is great.
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Amaunator



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think you should read the first part some more (the stealthy part). I recall issues like 'the mans dagger' instead of 'the man's dagger' and frequent berzerk as opposed to berserk. I liked the battle scene as well Wink.
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Purple Steve



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cheers man, i'll remember to have a good re-read before i get to work on the second part Smile

welcome back, btw. how was rome?
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 6:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A blast, really Wink. Too bad they robbed my cell phone, but it's replacable ^^.
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