Chapter XVI
Tuesday, January 30, 2007 - 12:40 AM
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A day (and a half hour) late, I have thusly fulfilled my promise to post the rewritten story through the party's arrival at Uther's Tomb. I've got the chapter rewritten, with Madoran's uncharacteristic animosity gone and replaced with a more even keel; the Aerie Peak dirge intact and (I hope) poignant as always; and the mystery of the Dead Ogre hopefully a bit more unsettling than before. The chapter, after much deliberating and gnashing of teeth, also has - drumroll please - a name! I give you, Friends in the Northlands!
If you haven't read them yet, I posted the previous two chapters, Salves and The Law-Dwarf's Orders, earlier today.
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