Rewrite Post
Wednesday, December 20, 2006 - 6:20 PM
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Of all the character choices I made the first time through, the one that's bugged me more than any others is the ease with which Horse writes off the fact that Fang is essentially responsible for the destruction of Storm City. I believe the first time around, his entire reaction to Fang's declaration (regarding Widget) that you have to “break a few eggs” was,
Fair enough, I thought. Still. Poor little guy.
That's not how the Horse I know would have reacted, and I've always wanted desperately to make it better. I believe I've done so.
These two new chapters also contain a bunch of my other favorite early Murloc moments... so I give you, Beer or Death!
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